What do you think?

[Desk Jockey]

I was made this with Video Scribe and was thinking of adding this to our website and to facebook also.

Too corny?

 

[hogjowl]

It would only be corny if you put your picture in it.

 

[Mikey P]

In the time it took me to watch that I could have powered down a whole Chulupa.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Hey thanks guys!

Fookers!

 

[Shane Deubell]

Its cool but the music is super boring, cant ya find something upbeat?

I have a couple, its ok to have in the mix.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I can change it. What do you suggest?

 

[hogjowl]

Just record your brothers music in his restaurant.

 

[Desk Jockey]

 

[Shane Deubell]

I can change it. What do you suggest?

How about one of your radio commercials?

 

[Desk Jockey]

We were thinking of doing one for residential carpet cleaning and paying for one of the radio personalities to do the voice. That background music would be add to it.

 

[Shane Deubell]

Why not just use one of your current commercials or old ones.

Someone might remember it...

 

[Desk Jockey]

I can add the commercials to oue site but they are audio. This is visual, I could make a scribe to match it though.

 

[Vivers]

I actually like it just the way it is. It's only 30sec long

 

[TomKing]

Richard you are taking advice from people who do not have any videos on their websites. Really?

Trust you gut.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I had mexican food with Lockhart last night. My gut says don't stray too far from the shitter.


J/k
Thanks Tom!

 

[ruff]

It's cute.
A little too long. No need to move camera (well illusion of camera moving- pan, zoom ) so many times.

Your message: Chavez restoration offers Water damage services 7 days a week, 365 days a year (by the way, where's 24?) can be done with less waste of time and be actually clearer and more memorable.

 

[dealtimeman]

Hey the food was good and eating it all in the same building that Chavez restoration was once in and owned was the cherry on top.

Awesome time and seeing you and Dan looking around at where you used to clean rugs and upholstery was priceless.

Good time!

 

[Desk Jockey]

I missed 24? Damn!

How long Ofer? I can adjust just about everything. Speed, transition, pause and camera movement. Off hand I think I have most elements 2.5 -3 seconds so I can make it draw fast if needed.

 

[ruff]

Damn, the 24 is there, I'm just used to seeing the 24/7/365 all together.
Tells you about my attention span!

Like in commercials, only more so on the internet. Don't waste time. I can't tell you exactly how long, just make it shorter.
This is the idea:

• Chavez restoration offers.
  
• 24/7/365 water/fire emergency services.
• You're in good hands (or whatever is the message you want to convey).

Limiting to just 24/7/365 is a bit of a waste, tie it with something else that is important and short.
The rest is a waste.

The hand writing is cute once, maybe twice (annoying afterwards). Like any medium, repetition can work for you. Done right.

 

[Hoody]

I would definitely use a voice over on it, make sure to mention your company name at least 3 times in the 30 seconds

 

[Becker]

extremely lame!

It is cool, when it is true drawing. But even at that, kinda time consuming. And unless the drawings capture attention, then interest is lost IMO.

 

[Becker]

 

[Desk Jockey]

Same program made that one too Becker. Who ever created it did it as an out line with no color.

Scrap the whole idea?It only took a few minutes to create, its not like I invested a bunch of time in it.

I questioned if it was a little too cornball. That's why I asked here before adding it anywhere???

I may make a shorter version and trot it out here next week. I don't have time today to mess with it.

Thanks

 

[Joe Appleby]

Love it! Maybe shorten it due to
Our limited attention these days

 

[Desk Jockey]

Hey the food was good and eating it all in the same building that Chavez restoration was once in and owned was the cherry on top.

Awesome time and seeing you and Dan looking around at where you used to clean rugs and upholstery was priceless.

Good time!

We enjoyed the company. Brenda & yourself are always welcome here!

You cracked me up with "Do you know these guys?" "These guys used to own this place" "We need to put up a plaque as history" The waiter thought you were nuts. Even the new owner had no clue what was going on. LOL

How ironic he was from Mikey's area. Apto's and a few blocks from Sea Cliff inn.

Good time!

 

[Mikey P]

It doesnt say anything a simple word balloon cant.

A waste of time that may piss off a customer.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Just stick with an ad?

That's why I come here, to throw crap at you guys and see if any of it sticks.

You know what I mean....


How about these, do they visual convey the same message without the fancy drawing?

 

[Shane Deubell]

I can add the commercials to oue site but they are audio. This is visual, I could make a scribe to match it though.

Thats what i was thinking, just put the audio from a radio commercial to the whiteboard video.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I can do that but it will take me some time to do it. I might try it with the air duct one first. The only thing is those radio commercials are 30 seconds. Maybe I can have them cut me down a few to 15-seconds and that way it doesn't put anyone to sleep drawing it.

 

[The Great Oz]

Looking at that from a consumer's point of view there's not a thing wrong with that video. Adding one of your 30-second audio commercials as a background would be perfect.

NOTE: My audio was off, so no comment on the music.