Which looks better?

[Desk Jockey]

Both are similar so I could use either. But which would you say you like better, "A" or "B"?

A)

B)

 

[WillS]

B definitely.

A - makes you focus on the word jumble above and your eyes don't really focus on the name or info your providing.

 

[Mikey P]

A


I wouldn't bother reading it otherwise

 

[Desk Jockey]

I like the word jumble but I made it. Sometimes you get too caught up in your work.

I think B looks better but I do like the jumble in A.

I'm torn as to which is better at a glance.

 

[Nate The Great]

A also...

 

[Cleanworks]

Eh

 

[Small town janitorial]

I like b. Just my opinion.

 

[Mikey P]

Listen to the Fonz

 

[tres davis]

B for sure

 

[The Wizard]

Neither of them. Focus more on the human emotion of finding / encountering what they just discovered, thus the need for your service.

 

[Papa John]

Version A tells the reader WHY they should tell their insurance provided they need to call Chavez-- more easily!!!-- DUH

 

[Desk Jockey]

Neither of them. Focus more on the human emotion of finding / encountering what they just discovered, thus the need for your service.

Like this?

 

[hogjowl]

Yeah, a decent looking female.

Better than that fugly truck.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Whatcha talkin bout Willis?

ok maybe!

 

[PrimaDonna]

B

Or the chick

 

[The Wizard]

Yes along those lines. Maybe a couple pics, like the broken water pipe as you have, over flowing bath tub

 

[J Scott W]

Between the two - strongly A.

If we include the women with the broklen pipe, I would pick that one.

 

[Old Coastie]

A and B look like the truck is blasting water out the exhaust.
C makes me think you are a plumber.

D might look like Ivanka swooning when she sees the living room awash, with the dog swimming for the door.

 

[Nate The Great]

Like this? View attachment 71323

Slap some flex-seal on it and call it a day... Chavez doesn't need to get the emotional marketing, he just needs to keep feeding the machine...

I do like emotional marketing myself...

 

[Desk Jockey]

This one targets more emotion but typically fires can be much more devastating. I'd much rather have a brief disruption from water damage than to suffer a fire.

 

[Papa John]

I still like version A ___ it covers all the different situations as to why they might need you.

 

[Old Coastie]

Except the van looks incontinent.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I still like version A ___ it covers all the different situations as to why they might need you.

This one targets restoration services in general.

 

[Papa John]

Who calls you first when "disaster Strikes"?-- the customer or the Insurance agent?
I would think the customer calls you first.

Version A spells it out in simple terms all the reason why they should call you--
maybe try this-- Fade the background wording just a little more but not as much as B

BTW all versions look good. I just think Version A will perform the best.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Yes, we want the customer to call us first. If they call the insurance company they will directed to use their vendor, not us.

The customer has to be willing to say they want us to get past the preferred vendor. Some will, others trust the provider to take good care of them like on the commercials.

Life isn't a commercial and the vendors get squeezed harder for price than we do. What option to they have once they have taken advantage of ever efficiency but to short performance.

 

[Old Coastie]

This one targets restoration services in general.
View attachment 71331

Likums

 

[bob vawter]

C...looks lik she slit her wrist from too many decisions.................

 

[Desk Jockey]

We do Trama Clean up too Bawb!

Just sayin

 

[steve_64]

I like B but Id change it to say tell your agent you already called Chavez.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I like that Steve!