hogjowl
Idiot™
I have a welcome wagon lady passing out free spotter bottles to new people who move into my little town. I am trying to design the wording for a postcard that ServiceMonster will mail out to them a week to a month after they receive my spotter bottle. I suck at this sort of thing and I am looking for suggestions from the Brian Robison, Ken Snow types that come here.
Here's my thougts on it, tell me how you would change it to make it better.
Dear Mrs. ?????
Welcome to Prattville! Doris with Friendly Welcome told me she gave you a bottle of our Poof Carpet and Upholstery spotter as a gift from us here at AdmiralClean. Poof is an outstanding spotter for use on carpet, rugs and upholstery. Unlike most grocery store spotters, Poof leaves no residue to attract soils and it dries to a fine powder that vacuums away. Simply apply it to the spot, allow it to dwell for a minute or two and then blot it up with a towel. After it dries, you can vacuum over the cleaned area if you like to vacuum away the fine powder residue.
Please keep it handy for your everyday needs and remember to call us for any of your carpet, tile and grout, wood and upholstery cleaning needs. If it's on the floor, we clean it!
Here's my thougts on it, tell me how you would change it to make it better.
Dear Mrs. ?????
Welcome to Prattville! Doris with Friendly Welcome told me she gave you a bottle of our Poof Carpet and Upholstery spotter as a gift from us here at AdmiralClean. Poof is an outstanding spotter for use on carpet, rugs and upholstery. Unlike most grocery store spotters, Poof leaves no residue to attract soils and it dries to a fine powder that vacuums away. Simply apply it to the spot, allow it to dwell for a minute or two and then blot it up with a towel. After it dries, you can vacuum over the cleaned area if you like to vacuum away the fine powder residue.
Please keep it handy for your everyday needs and remember to call us for any of your carpet, tile and grout, wood and upholstery cleaning needs. If it's on the floor, we clean it!
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