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Mark Imbesi
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I just reviewed the "THE VERY ROUGH DRAFT OF MY DISPLAY AD" post and didnt want to hijack it. I found Dave Yoakum's response very easy to understand. It insipered me to put words to paper (MS WORD...lol). I have a December 8th deadline to get back into a 55+ Community's Monthly Newsletter. Until 2004, this community has been golden to me. It runs monthly and full page costs $80/mo. Prepay for 12 months and it's $72/mo. It covers approx. 660 homes. I can change the ads as I wish. I want to run something like this for January and February. What you think?
Who can you trust when your floors need cleaning? (Headline, state a problem)
Throughout my childhood, I remember my Nana, at times, needing work done in her home. There was never a doubt on who to call for any problem she may have had. If she didn’t already know who to call, she asked a friend. These service professionals were well respected and trusted to do a job right and at a reasonable price. I don’t know why, but those types of people are hard to find.
My name is Marc Imbesi and I have built my floor cleaning and repair business based on these simple, “old fashioned” values. I am the owner and operator of Flooring Solutions. I will be the person to answer your call, show up to give you a firm price quote and arrive to complete the work. And, when I am finished, you will be so relieved to know you can always count on me, you will want to tell your friends.
So, if you look down on your floors, and see a problem, please trust that I am the professional to call! (Copy Body, Problem Solved)
Winter Carpet Cleaning Special:
Most furniture moving is FREE to (NAME OF COMMUNITY) residents!
Will return the next day to remove furniture tabs and blocks!
ALWAYS 10%OFF Senior Discount!
PLUS an additional 10%OFF (NAME OF COMMUNITY) Residents thru February 2009!
I want your business! (Specials (some free), Call to Action)
I have to work on pictures and layout. I will post progress in this thread. Thanks for looking and giving your input! And, thank you, Dave, for the easy layout! This BB ROCKS!
Who can you trust when your floors need cleaning? (Headline, state a problem)
Throughout my childhood, I remember my Nana, at times, needing work done in her home. There was never a doubt on who to call for any problem she may have had. If she didn’t already know who to call, she asked a friend. These service professionals were well respected and trusted to do a job right and at a reasonable price. I don’t know why, but those types of people are hard to find.
My name is Marc Imbesi and I have built my floor cleaning and repair business based on these simple, “old fashioned” values. I am the owner and operator of Flooring Solutions. I will be the person to answer your call, show up to give you a firm price quote and arrive to complete the work. And, when I am finished, you will be so relieved to know you can always count on me, you will want to tell your friends.
So, if you look down on your floors, and see a problem, please trust that I am the professional to call! (Copy Body, Problem Solved)
Winter Carpet Cleaning Special:
Most furniture moving is FREE to (NAME OF COMMUNITY) residents!
Will return the next day to remove furniture tabs and blocks!
ALWAYS 10%OFF Senior Discount!
PLUS an additional 10%OFF (NAME OF COMMUNITY) Residents thru February 2009!
I want your business! (Specials (some free), Call to Action)
I have to work on pictures and layout. I will post progress in this thread. Thanks for looking and giving your input! And, thank you, Dave, for the easy layout! This BB ROCKS!
