Thankyou Mr Miller!

[Mikey P]

 

[Chris A]

Nice, but he spelled your last name wrong?

 

[Steve Toburen]

Very nice. Wayne is a pro.

Steve Toburen
www.SFS.JonDon.com

PS My non-expert opinion is there is too much copy on the back of the card. People's attention span is shorter than ever before. (This from someone who has been correctly accused many times of undue verbosity!) I HIGHLY recommend this 30 year old book that is more apropos than ever:

http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Well-30th ... 750&sr=1-1

Spend the $8.83 and change your view of writing business copy forever.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Looks great! Wayne is awesome! 8)

 

[Mikey P]

Omg..

Last name is wrong...lol

 

[Mikey P]

Steve,

As long as they see the white text...

 

[FB7777]

its funny that Steve mentions long ad copy

Have you ever reviewed The Next 30 Days from JonDon, Steve?


Most verbose cluttered ad copy I've ever seen

 

[Steve Toburen]

its funny that Steve mentions long ad copy

Have you ever reviewed The Next 30 Days from JonDon, Steve?


Most verbose cluttered ad copy I've ever seen

That was before I read "On Writing Well".

Steve Toburen
www.SFS.JonDon.com

PS Plus Yeadon wrote most of it and he gets paid by the word. I on the other hand get paid for every time I can put www.SFS.JonDon.com up on the web. Oops- did it again!

 

[FB7777]

that explains it Steve!!!

The Next 30 Days ad copy reminded me of the Bane Clene Advertising Book with camera ready art work back in the late 80s


Back to Wayne... yea its a really good ad. Wayne's ads are top shelf

 

[Jay_wat]

nice! if you have need of any more cats,,,let me know,,have 2. just dont let my wife know!!