Ultimate Bestest Super Duper Commercial Flier Ever

[Jeremy]

Any suggestions other than change the pics are appreciated. I have a feeling this could be a winner. Anyone got a better flier they can post? I need ideas....


Front:

Back:

 

[Bob Foster]

I like it a lot!

 

[Desk Jockey]

Looks great!

I like "TIME IS MONEY Give us 15-minutes and we will show you how to save thousands in replacement costs"

Keep hitting them, it's just a matter of timing! 8)

 

[Jeremy]

Can you guys proof read them for me? I suck at spelling- but I'm wicked cool!

 

[Desk Jockey]

I don't see how you're wicked cool!

:wink:

 

[Jeremy]

Oh, well maybe spelling is my strenth.... :roll:

 

[Desk Jockey]

 

[Guest]

Looks good!

 

[Ron Werner]

Excellent Card
Excellent Copy,
Excellent pictures,
Very compelling
I like the "Time I$ Money", the use of the "$" sign

A couple tweaks to consider:
"Let us solve a problem for you"
could be highlighted. Its a good line.

"You work hard and you work a lot of long hours"
Just thinking it could be shortened.
You work a lot of long and hard hours.
Sometimes the longer copy appeals to people more.

The choice of words "more than competent", would it be better with stronger words?
You get all the benefit of a (top quality, or high quality, or superb, etc) carpet and floor care dept at a fixed and predictable cost.
The idea is that they are getting an awesome company but at a fixed cost they can budget on.

All I could find. I think that card i$ going to worth a lot of $ to you.

 

[ksokalski]

Hey Jeremy,

Have you tested it out yet?

Kris

 

[Jeremy]

Just got them printed yesterday...

 

[XTREME1]

too bad I was just about to point out a few SpeillINg ERREors and Grammarattical McStakes