Not supposed to be a company overview...
Read my original post, it is about the guarantee. Don't worry about one phrase/sentence the guy just looked at my website or googled cleaning.
Pretty easy to delete something.
Sorry for the highjack Shane, ya know it tends to get a little crazy around here at times.
I liked the musical and the drawing was outstanding. Positively One of a kind to a point.
I have to tell ya in my honest opinion (and opinions are like taking a dump, we all do it) the Guarantee 30day bit might haunt ya, to many people are out to take advantage of others thesedays and I would be super afraid of it biting me in the rear. Seems like your looking backwards instead of forwards.
When I get asked, and this is just me, I state verbally 3 day resoiling guarantee. So far it has worked and I know good and well that there will be no resoiling issues : ) Unless I get desperate and head to Sams Club, lol
Also as stated earlier, where's the color explosion? Needs a BIG BANG at the end and pretty colors would def do it.
To me this whole advertising thing is sorta like the candy bars in the checkout line, you keep staring at it and you know you want it, it's right there within reach so might as well go for it.
How do I draw in that Venge shopper hook line and sinker everytime? The longer and more drawn out it is, the less of the customers attention we keep on the subject matter. Then once we get them, How do we make sure that they eat the best dang candy bar ever produced? Get them addicted to you!
Two rules I did learn over 12 years in advertising, selling guns and ammo was: KISS and Mis Prints
Kiss = Keep it simple stupid
Mis Prints = Attention Getters. This one stumped us all, but it worked. Every butt chewing I ever got for not proofing something was a huge success in the end and won me the largest sales tickets in the companies 30+ year history. Not sure if it would work in the CC Industry or not so.....
Going to crawl back in my hole now.
Chris