I don't think I have ever seen anybody post an ad on here that didn't cause them to get raked over the coals. Thank you for having the balls to post yours. If I saw enough ads on this board, I might, over time, learn how to become better at it myself.
I don't take it personal. Like Richard said I learn from it as well.
Also keep in mind what works for se won't work for others. Everyone needs to learn their target area and market the way their area wants to be marked to not the way someone learned from a seminar or class.
Dave could come to my area and try his run in the mill not out of the box generic marketing that every other cleaner does and not set himself apart and have a tough time keeping up.
I have researched and targeted my area to the point that I know what works and what my customers respond to and its not the usual stuff you see on tv at 1am like he just outlined.
I say do what works for you using some basic guidelines.
I can't get better if no one tells me what I'm doing wrong so don't take people critiquing you personally but also pick and choose who you listen to lol
Thanks for the adjustment advise guys
I appreciate you taking the time to do so