Area Rug Envelope stuffer

[Desk Jockey]

Too harsh of a statement on the rug dusting?

 

[Ken Snow]

The sentence abut it reads poorly, plus you are using an industry lingo term that won't likely mean squat to the consumer. they'll think you are using pledge and a white towel on it :-)

 

[Desk Jockey]

I knew I was going to slammed on this one but I bravely pushed forward anyway!


We do use pledge but with a blue towel! Psst don't tell anyone it a trade secret!

 

[Ken Snow]

At least fix the verbiage in the first sentence.

 

[Desk Jockey]

What? I wrote the first one, I thought you would at least fix it for me!

I'll give it to big "D" I have a marketing meet with him later today and made this and the commercial carpet flyer to throw in to my bunch to review. Gotta make it look like I do something around here!

He's always accusing me of playing on the internet.
Me? Never!

 

[Ken Snow]

Your rugs will not only be cleaned, they'll also be dusted (whatever the f$%k that means)

 

[Desk Jockey]

LOL

 

[Willy P]

I knew I was going to slammed on this one but I bravely pushed forward anyway!


We do use pledge but with a blue towel! Psst don't tell anyone it a trade secret!

Chocolate brown is the bestest.

 

[Mikey P]

Try this instead...


"Before we lovingly hand wash your beloved fine textile in our custom built soft water spa, we'll whack the living shit out of it with some pos overpriced blunt lawn mower we bought from Dusty the Rug Fag"

 

[Desk Jockey]

something tells me that's not quite PC...but what the hell!

Thanks!

 

[Hoody]

There really is no call to action to get them to call. I think the yellow print already explains what is going to happen to their rug.

"Our experienced trained technicians will bring the soft texture and vibrant colors back that you remember when they were new. We also specialize in pet stain and odor removal!"

"Rugs can be brought to our cleaning facility or we do offer pick up and delivery services. Mention this flyer and receive a FREE quart of our cleaning spotter."(Or 15% off, or FREE pick up, or something)"

 

[Desk Jockey]

Thanks Hoody!!!