Commercial & Residential Flyers: Opinions please

[Jeremy]

This is a full page that will be cut down to make 2 separate 1/2 page pieces. Both are tageted to price sensitive prospects that still want it done right.... Which should be just about everyone right now... LOL

Front:

Back:

What do you think?

 

[Mikey P]

spiffy!

 

[Brian R]

Yea, I would go with a real pic on the back as well.
Looks good.

 

[Royal Man]

You can get stock photos at: istock.com

(I thought that kid/dog photo was copyrighted)

 

[XTREME1]

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[John Spezia]

How do you clean & apply protector on 600sqft of carpet for $.17/sqft??? Are you in business for a hobby or to make money?

Please explain the $99 for 2 rooms thing..

 

[XTREME1]

he doesn't exactly clean it he mushes it around with a spinner

 

[Jeremy]

Up to 5 rooms & a hall for $239.95... Each addtional room $40 to clean & protect or $30 just to clean. This "special pricing" is for open areas/exposed carpet only, you can move the furniture or we'll just go around it. Should be profitable... At least in theory. If nothing else, I'll pad my data base a bit & get my help some hours in.

 

[XTREME1]

my regular price is about $195 for 5 rooms cleaned and protected

 

[Jeremy]

So... Uh... Where is the problem?

 

[XTREME1]

no problem here

 

[kristine dominique]

jeremy:

there's a guy in southern mass that uses that same picture of that muddy kid and dog. do you just use stock photos?... ever create you own?... i think stock photos look sharper than the home-made variety. i wonder what the general population prefers?

krissy.

 

[XTREME1]

if I am the guy in southern mass it is because Jsweet made the posrcard for me