Critic my website please

[Brian R]

I made some changes to my website...mainly the home page.
Let me know what you think.
I did it all by me lonesome.

Thanks


http://www.service1carpetcleaning.com

Don't forget to run you mouse over the pictures. Weeeee!!

 

[Mark Imbesi]

Did you make the link NOT WORK all by yourself, too?

 

[Ron Lippold]

nice

 

[Able 1]

Looks great!

 

[handdi]

put your pix on it

 

[alazo1]

I would center the page.

Also for ranking's sake
1. Edit your description and title meta tags to read the cities you service.

2. Your text says "Quality Service ... Quality Cleaning" after that I would put the areas you service. Example: Quality Service ... Quality Cleaning Proudly serving (your areas).

3. The services in the home page seem to be in a graphic of some sort. It is better to have these as text so the web bots can read them.

Basically, any text that is a keyword of your business should be left text and not made a graphic.

Albert

 

[Brian R]

Thanks everyone.

Albert, uh oh. I actually took out the areas that I service.
I will have to put them back in.
I didn't think about that.

I didn't want to limit myself to any certain areas.

I will do it tomorrow.

 

[Brian R]

Ok, I put the areas back in...good call...That's why I posted the site...I knew I would screw up something.


Randy, do you mean put my personal pic on the website? Are you kidding me? No one wants to see my mug all up in lights and all that.


I will do the other pages later...and yes I will post it again just in case.

Thanks again for the help.

 

[handdi]

the experts say to do this put pix on it
i run my pix in paper and direct mail
get alot of comments on it.
I want him to come thats a problem since i have a tech that does the work
I"M goin to put all of ours pictures on every thing soon
It does work
lets people see whos comin over to their house.
my opionion any way.

 

[Ron Werner]

Nice site.
Easy to navigate, easy to read.

For your personal pic, make a page that talks about you and your busn, ie About Us

The only flaw I saw was on your Home page. The line "Call Now For An Appointment" is showing on top of your office hours. I'm using FireFox 2.0.0.18 as a webbrowser. It shows properly in Explorer. I noticed that your Carpet Cleaning/Tile Cleaning mouseover works in Explorer but not in FireFox.

I like your letters , nice touch. MIght want to emphasize those more, too easy to miss.

 

[Bruce Humphrey]

I think your website looks very nice, I'm using Google Chrome for a browser and everything works great.

 

[Brian R]

Ok, I'll put a pic of my mug as soon as I can get one that doesn't break the monitor.

Ron, good idea. I will put a page about that.
The "call now for an appointment" doesn't run over anything on my screen. Looks ok here.
Thanks for the help either way...Everyone.

 

[Brian R]

Ron wrote

like your letters , nice touch. MIght want to emphasize those more, too easy to miss.

Not sure what that means...are you talking about my font?

 

[alazo1]

Are you kidding me? No one wants to see my mug all up in lights and all that.

That's what photoshop is for

Albert

 

[Brian R]

Albert. lmao...I'll just try to find a pic of Brad Pitt cleaning carpets.



Ron...ok...I'm an idiot.
It's been so long since I have gone through my own damn website that I forgot about the letters I posted.
I will make them more prominent.

Thanks Bro.

 

[Brian R]

OK, I made some Major changes to my website and would like your input again.

My family always says it looks good, even customers will

But I know you guys are brutally honest.

Check out the pages and click the links and all that.

If you can find a screw up, please let me know.

Thanks

 

[alazo1]

Check your fonts. They should be consistant.

The wording on the home page is good because there are a lot of keywords but not saturated.

Unfortunately there are very few keywords in the other links which is diluting your chances to get listed higher up in the search engines. If you don't have any external links, it may be better to rewrite those pages to contain more keywords.

1. Edit your description and title meta tags to read the cities you service.

I don't see you when I search for "carpet cleaning Roseville". Pm me, I'll help you get on the first page.

Albert

 

[Brian R]

Check your fonts. They should be consistant.

The wording on the home page is good because there are a lot of keywords but not saturated.

Unfortunately there are very few keywords in the other links which is diluting your chances to get listed higher up in the search engines. If you don't have any external links, it may be better to rewrite those pages to contain more keywords.

1. Edit your description and title meta tags to read the cities you service.

I don't see you when I search for "carpet cleaning Roseville". Pm me, I'll help you get on the first page.

Albert

When I google myself "carpet cleaner in roseville" I come right up..twice at least on the first page.


I have been reading about the meta tags and keywords. I will have to spend a day just doing that.
I will Pm you for more info. During the week is tough to do anything so I might have to wait until next weekend.