Critic Part 2

[Mountain View Carpet Care]

 

[Bob Foster]

change the statements their boring and mean nothing

loose the truck and put a good before and after picture in instead

The word guaranteed had got to be the most ignored and over used word there is.

Honestly if it were me I would contact Wayne Miller an tell him what you want to accomplish and pay him some money (less than what you might think) and then it will be done right - no doubt.

Don't mean to hurt your feelings but I really believe what you have there will head directly to peoples garbage cans.


What do you think of this as a promo. You hire MV and we will take the money you pay us for a room and donate it to XXXXX charity. Minimum x dollar invoice

 

[Larry B]

I think this one looks better but I still dont get the stuff at the bottom about rooms. Your card is for SQ FT pricing not by the room.

 

[Lyman]

were do you keep getting mikeys baby pics from.

 

[KevinL]

I'm sure you love your kid but he's no model. Fix the small print wording.
Headline..Tired of the Splash and Dash Carpet Cleaning?
Our technicians aren't paid commission so they won't rush through your job and take all your money.

 

[Bob Foster]

nice line!