Gonna leave this behind with a trifold..

[Mikey P]

name dropping, attitude, what am I missing?

 

[FredC]

slightly cringey

 

[hogjowl]

“As Realtors “?

 

[FredC]

a lot of comma abuse

 

[Desk Jockey]

It's ok but you know where all our marketing stuff ends up. Plus you really only want the movers and shakers.

Will they let you do a wine & cheese tray one evening? Then you can actually give your song and dance. You speak very well to groups.

 

[Mikey P]

“As Realtors “?

re·al·tor
/ˈrē(ə)ltər/
noun
TRADEMARK•NORTH AMERICAN

1. a person who acts as an agent for the sale and purchase of buildings and land; a real estate agent.

 

[FredC]

re·al·tor
/ˈrē(ə)ltər/
noun
TRADEMARK•NORTH AMERICAN

1. a person who acts as an agent for the sale and purchase of buildings and land; a real estate agent.

Are you a Realtor?

Yes they will likely get it but it is a poorly constructed sentence.

 

[FredC]

I offer services that can help you spruce up a home going on the market that you, as Realtors, should probably know about.



for preposition nazis

As Realtors you may want to know about the services I offer that can help you spruce up a home going on the market.

 

[FredC]

Your kids run both locations?

 

[Mikey P]

**** off

 

[Nomad74]

Well, it's better than a Watchtower.

 

[DAT]

Well, it's better than a Watchtower.

How would you know? You ever read one before tossing it into the trash?

 

[Nomad74]

Nope, that's how I know

 

[Ron K]

Sound too folksie
Grammar matters. Fred C's sentence is 100% better.
Or shucks just have a Hamberder!

 

[Wandslinger]

slightly cringey

Agree with Fred, keep it straight forward and professional.

 

[Mikey P]

I left my trifold by itself.

Creative writing at 3:30 am probably ain't the best idea

 

[Doug Rice]

re·al·tor
/ˈrē(ə)ltər/
noun
TRADEMARK•NORTH AMERICAN

1. a person who acts as an agent for the sale and purchase of buildings and land; a real estate agent.

But are we a group ?

 

[Nomad74]

But are we a group ?

More like captive members of an asylum.

 

[Steve Lawrence]

name dropping, attitude, what am I missing?

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I think it's pretty darn good. Don' listen to the naysayers.

 

[Vincent Feehan]

Leave the anal part out<<<<

 

[Nomad74]

Leave the anal part out<<<<

I thought that was the best part.

 

[Steve Lawrence]

Leave the anal part out<<<<

I would leave it in. People like having their stuff cleaned by an anal person. I know I do.

 

[hogjowl]

Boyle’s customer likes anus’ too

 

[Cleanworks]

Boyle’s customer likes anus’ too

In a pigs ass.