It's that time of year again....

[Jeremy]

Critique this flyer:

 

[billyeadon]

floors

Jeremy,

Why the Superman pose. I think you would be better suited with a picture of the building superintendent in the picture. The two of you should be kneeling down admiring the floor.

The idea is another satisfied customer of Brightworks. I know you are proud of the floor but it makes you look cocky instead of proud.

 

[Jeremy]

Good point. The picture was taken as a joke... It just looked good. Besides, I am cocky...LOL
Revisions to follow... Keep it coming.

 

[Jeremy]

Take 2:

 

[hogjowl]

Good point. The picture was taken as a joke... It just looked good. Besides, I am cocky...LOL
Revisions to follow... Keep it coming.

Who told you it looked good?

 

[Rex Tyus]

I say go with the cocky picture. Facility managers can relate to it.

There is an old saying

It's a sorry dawg that won't wag his own tail

 

[-JB-]

Holy crap!

That was you in that picture?

I thought it was a G.I. Joe doll, well same difference I surpose.

 

[Blue Monarch]

i thought it was a "what what" video star standing there

 

[Fon Johnson]

Hey, dog. If ya want, I'll let ya use a picutre of one of my floors!

 

[XTREME1]

have you done anyother floors your prospects may be tired of seeing those ones in every ad

 

[Jeremy]

Hey, dog. If ya want, I'll let ya use a picutre of one of my floors!

For what?.... The before picture?