Really quick
Your link goes to your site with a "Page Not Found
We're sorry, but the page you are looking for isn't here.
Try searching for the page you are looking for or using the navigation in the header or sidebar"
You can click the home page and then it's good...but that's one too many steps.
I'm sure Cermack knows this and you did say it's just a "Draft" so it will be cool I'm sure
Phone number and info get hidden in the background...change the color of the font or change the background.
Move the phone number to the upper right corner and put an email link near it.
Joey, Your logo still kinda sucks...even after seeing on the vans. How much would it cost to change it? You can always do it slowly...no one will notice the transition
The way the logo lays on the cloudy background really doesn't work
I wouldn't use the cloudy background unless you used it as a background background (Where the grey is)
The kid on the carpet is good
But it looks like it was just thrown in there...I don't like the way the copy goes around it.
Hard to see that you are a carpet cleaner right away...even with the "Carpet Cleaning" listed. Doesn't stick out.
It's a very common layout and that's fine. You don't want to over do it with too much anyway.
It's simple enough to not intimidate and it's not too cluttered so it won't run anyone off.
Overall it's not bad...I am here to point out the bad mostly. That's just what I look for when critiquing.
The coloring of the tile bars look a little too corporate if you are going for the residential customer
I can see it's no where near done so I am probably wasting keystrokes telling you what Cermack already knows.
I'll wait for the finished product.
:mrgreen: 
