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B&BGaryC

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B&BGaryC
It's un-finished, some of the information is filler until I get to writing real content, a lot of it is more complicated than it needs to be and none of it is spell-checked. For these reasons I really don't want any of you to see it and hit me over the head with all the things I've done wrong building it... but....

I know your input is valuable and I should listen to what you have to say.

http://www.BandBCarpetCleaning.com
 

Brian R

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What Fred sed

Put you phone number in the right upper corner with a "Call Now" etc
Put an email link there
It looks uncentered with that "division of" sign

over all it looks a little "commercial" not so much "residential"

Colors aren't bad

I'll look more later.
 

B&BGaryC

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They are not paying for the listing, but they are actively referring me to their clients. Most of them are BNI members, but some of them are just good referral sources.
 

rick imby

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I would personalize the site by putting your picture---on every page. Maybe down in the footer or on the side of the header and make the header bigger.

I could not read the business cards on the screen of my laptop.

The footer should not have grey print on grey background. You want your print to be very distinct from the background. Make the print larger and put your USP and a picture of you down there in the Footer..

A Call to Action on every page.

Rick


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