Neighbor post card..........what do you think?

boazcan

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Besides the fine print for min job of $250, what is the critique?

Maybe a different color carpet?

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If you can tell that it is carpet I wouldn't change it but if it isn't distinctive I would change the color of the carpet
 

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I think it looks good as well but the carpet could look more... carpety.
 

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Those stated were my general concerns as well.


I will get him to make the carpet more like carpet.

I had a friend of mine do it. He does website design, but hates doing print work. Too bad, he is really good. He did alot of my website with my brother.
 

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Steve Lillard said:
The $50 off might be a little to much,
try $15 Off

Too much as in a perception part by the customer or a profit part. Not a problem on the profit side as avg ticket is over $300. But I am curious what your experience has been between the two. Thanks for the feedback.
 

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I really like the ad.

Maybe I would change the $50 off to 25% off.

Agree that the carpet color could be reworked as well.

Still one of the better ads I've seen.

Let us see the revision, when you get it!
 

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