New water damage commercial

[Desk Jockey]

I'm not sure that I like the background music but then I don't know what I'd want to replace it with either.

Change it leave it?

https://soundcloud.com/user225188288/new-107-water-commercial

Here is the Fire one also.

https://soundcloud.com/user225188288/13-1

 

[Bruce Humphrey]

I like it, it sounds just like the big boys around here. As far as the back ground music , it's quiet enough that it's not going to matter what it is. Sound professional!

 

[Desk Jockey]

Thanks Bruce. I'm not sure what I would want as background but I thought it was fairly plain. Different radio station than the others, we're still in the courting stage with them.

 

[GCCLee]

The low down and dirty : )music needs to fade in at the beginning and level out at a softer volume than what you have now. I say this as hearing the phone number at the end of the fire one is comfusing on my brain, too much going on there.The Fire one, well, commercials that have sirens are very attention getting. So much they really tick me off when driving : ) Excellent Sir!My $0.02 fur free

 

[Steve Toburen]

I agree. The music is distracting. Would it be too much of a cliche to have the sound of gushing water at the beginning, fade out to nothing during the dialogue and then have the sound of extraction at the ending?

Steve

PS Where is Bill "Marketing" Yeadon when you need him?

 

[Erik]

Are they two commercials? I think they sound great! And with Steve's suggestions, it will be top notch.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I'll tell Dan your suggestions and see what he thinks. I like it!

 

[Desk Jockey]

Yes two. One water one fire.

 

[Mardie]

She says your name to fast and to weak. Your name should be pronounced just slightly stronger than the rest of the content. Overall I like her voice and the content. Classy commercial. Just my 2 cents

 

[Erik]

Would you have to cut much, or possibly add a few seconds to make it one? seems like you would get more bang for your buck. just my 2