Opinions on new website

[Brian R]

Ok, so I come here for the honest truth and God knows I usually get more than I ask for.

I am combining my two companies into one and have my redid website which I have never posted here before.
My old website address forwards to it but here is the regular address.

www.prioritycleaner.com


Please let me know what you think.
Paricularly the front page.

Thanks a million.

 

[hogjowl]

Just use Jennifers picture.

 

[Brian R]

Just use Jennifers picture.

LOl, I hear Ya.

I am appealing to the pitty call from the housewife.

 

[Brian R]

It's the
"Well there must be SOMETHING good about this guy is SHE will go out with him."

 

[Chris Muetterties]

I would widen the page and try to get all the info on the home page to show with out having to scroll down.

My2cents

 

[Brian R]

There's a good point.
On my screen it is not filling the whole screen on the sides...is it that way for everyone?

 

[Brian R]

I think it looks good Brian. Be sure to check some spacing and grammar on things. Nicely layed out and gets your info out there. I do have to say the online personality compared to the picture is a tad disappointing

Did you notice errors?


Yea, I didn't think to remove the pic before I posted it. lol

 

[Bruce Humphrey]

Steven one day you will get older just like the rest of us , but on the inside you will still feel like you are 18 and ready to take on the world.

The site looks good Brian. Does she know that you're conn0r?

 

[roro]

Nice clean site that loads fast. Just a couple of things I noticed.


"We have the best Cleaning Technicians on our team ready to get your home or office clean and healthy. "

Brian - doesn't sound right. What jobs do you put your average or your worst Techs on

For your commercial you state
"Licensed and Insured"

So for your domestic you are not insured :?:

roro

 

[Mr Carpet]

I have found that you'll get much better response if you turn your contact us into a large free quote button.

If your customer is already on the web why would you make them go to an other media (the phone)when they can easily just click on a large free quote button and send you an email.

Also, if they are finding you at their work they may not want to talk on the phone out loud.

I get several jobs a week this way.

Don't let your competition find out about this tip.


Dave Yoakum
www.FreemarketingForever.com

 

[Jay D]

I am learning about websites. It looks good. Look closer at your keywords in the content area. You only list Roseville and no other citys or what state your in. Add a couple other citys and also the state. I know less than you I'm sure but thats what I saw.

 

[Mr Carpet]

Your keyword do need a "little" work.

keywords" Carpet Cleaning, Tile, Upholstery, repair, flood damage, flood, carpet, tile cleaning, Roseville,test44

 

[renegade_cowboy]

7 out of 10 stars

 

[alazo1]

This is your best one yet.

Albert

 

[boazcan]

Besides not spelling "Brian" and "Jenifer" correctly , it is simple and effective

Looks good.

 

[davegillfishing]

i think it really looks great..i would make it bigger, make it take up the entire page..
i dont know but you may want to play with putting your phone number under the name of the company then your catch line under that..
looks great you should be proud..
dave

 

[Desk Jockey]

I see your cute wife, but are you the dog above or the one in the suit?

 

[Brian R]

Thanks for the help everyone, I will make some changes because of it.

F' U chavez. :mrgreen:


I have an idea for the extra space on the sides that might work.
I will bump this thread when I get it done.

 

[Brian R]

Can someone post what keywords I should use for my area?

I would like to take the easy way out and just cut and paste.
It would be much appreciated. :wink: