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Matt B

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I need suggestions please , be gentle.

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FB19087

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Is that an alien waiting for his ship to land on the door?

It isn't horrible

The logo seems a little odd but if it is recognized in your community.......


If it were me I'd find a different but similar (colors are good) background gradient/design without the alien while dropping the logo

might also tweak the name font spacing and shading
 
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ruff

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  1. No need for Ceramic tile, tile would do. No upholstery?
  2. No need for cleaning twice (after each item), one at the end will do fine.
Saiger will love it. It may bring him the blues :winky:
 

Desk Jockey

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I think what you do should be much more prominent. Currently its gets lost.

So unless everyone is already familiar with your name and what you do, they only get the name. Which might suggest you do vct.

I don't care much for the "Systems" font. Have you looked at other fonts?
 
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Most people will think that's a golf wood..
That was my first thought...but then i saw the little white bursts and thought maybe hockey


I really doubt anyone who saw it would think floor cleaning
 
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I think what you do should be much more prominent. Currently its gets lost.


I don't care much for the "Systems" font. Have you looked at other fonts?

I agree with the "what you do" being more prominent

I think the font would be ok if it was slightly more integrated but that may be more because of the way it is layered in draft.
 

ruff

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The logo seems a little odd but if it is recognized in your community.......
No matter how delusional we all are, I doubt any of our clients recognizes any of our logos.

It took Coca Cola a hundred years and a few billion $$$ to be recognized.
And some people (Damon of the Redding?) still prefer Pepsi with their baconator :winky:
 
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The Great Oz

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Yeah, that logo... The whole idea of a logo is to allow illiterates to know what you do. A nicer (Fred) way of saying that might be that it should be recognizable at a glance. If you think the logo has value after everyone finishes making fun of it, I'd suggest a smaller version on the door.

Move the "Systems floor care" forward to the door, making the word systems smaller, bullet point what you do in the space now open at the upper back of the panel, and move your phone number and web address to space at the bottom of the panel. A standard layout, but quick-glance readability is what you want.

If the busyness of the background blue/black pattern detracts from readability, I'd calm it down a little as well.
 

Desk Jockey

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Reduce the size of everything but the services. Enlarge those.
Don't listen to Porkfritter. 😉
 
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Bob Pruitt

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website? Carpet and Tile Cleaning. It doesn't need to be a wrap.
A picture of Tiger Woods next to your golf club logo.
 
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Cleanworks

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First thing I think of when I see that logo is a toilet plunger. Looks like a plumbing truck if you don't read the signs.
 

Mark Saiger

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The services... Maybe need to be in a background type box to stand out.

Add a website if you have it
 
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Old Coastie

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It isn’t nearly as ugly as my van. But I thought the logo was a lab beaker.
 

Trip Moses

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Wraps are nice and professional but people sometimes don’t know what they are looking at. Just a whiz of color going by. It’s a good looking wrap. Do it for yourself and to make your competition jealous.
 

Hack Attack

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As most have said not a fan of the font or logo but if its recognised in your area.. then dont fix what aint broken

but your services do need to be more prominent imo
 

Mikey P

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Like Boyle said, it's "bad ass" dude!

I hope you have a 650HP or larger in there and not some effeminate CleanCo...

and if Van Halen's "ain't talkin about love" isn't cranking out of that thing 24/7 at 11, I'll be bitterly disappointed..
 
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