Web sites critique please

[Shorty]

Due to being castigated earlier on in a previous post ( on the Aussie Forum ), where my web site address was published by a person from outside of Australia, I stated that that site was several years old and was actually being overhauled.

I don't bullschitte :wink:



The proof (o.p. Bundy is in the pudding so to speak.



Here is that proof.



http://www.get.shorty.com.au


Not only that, there's more......................


http://www.cairnscommercialcarpetcare.com.au



But wait, there's still more.


http://www.cairnsleathercare.com.au


Please also bear in mind that all three of these sites are not fully complete, and are still "under construction", with more content, services and photos to be added as and when they become available.


None of these sites are silver, gold nor platinum, but I am very happy with them all.


One also DOES NOT get a free set of silver coated lead spoons or a cd on how to market your business. :shock:

I see where one poor bugger over in the U.K. just paid GBP£1,700 which is equivalent to AU$3,468.88 to an American entrepreneur, to knock up a web site on the same, (or similar), Wordpress template that mine are on.

Sorry, the above amount equates to US$2,796.58

The chap seems happy with what he has paid.

I would appreciate any feedback, both good and bad on any of the above web sites, in this way I will be able to better serve my customers.

Also bear in mind, no animals were harmed, nor tre's or any other form of flora or fauna damaged.

Apart from the screaming gecko that just got rolled on by my wheelie chair.


Thanks & Ooroo,

:roll:

 

[Larry B]

Not bad shorty. I like the way you done the leather site

 

[Brian R]

1st one I like because it is simple, clean, appealing and easy to navigate.
I would put a picture or two on it to keep the mind interested.

Edit...you need to have a phone number displayed better.

It might be the same in the leather site...I'll have to look.

 

[Brian R]

I really like the leather one too.
It will appeal to the type of people who have leather furniture and clothing etc.
Love the way the links at the top work.
Nice site...
NOt for your typical happy homeowner, wifey, shopper...but like I said...will appeal to the leather people.

 

[Brian R]

Man Shorty...all three look good.

The commercial cleaning is very commerciall cleaning like.
The way it's laid out is pretty serious and geared towards that office manager looking to just get a pro to clean the office.

Nice job on each really.




Can I copy your commercial clean site? 8)
I have been thinking of building one for a while now.

I won't totally copy it, just kind of follow in that direction.

Yes, I have no shame.
With the way I do things...it won't be the same in a month anyway.

 

[ACE]

I aways get a good luagh when I see this line on your repair page:

"Replacing damaged carpet from pot plants. For this, a donor piece of carpet shall be required."



The site looks good to me.

 

[Jack May]

I may as well add my voice publicly too Shorty and give a resounding WELL DONE SIR!!

I know I've been keeping tabs on it as they have developed but great finish too.

John

 

[Shorty]

Thank you all, I have taken notes and will be rectifying things down the track.

Brian, you may want to contact Fred Geyen of The Geyen Group,
( http://www.geyengroup.com/ )

I got my original idea from him on the commercial site, and asked him the same question that you have asked me.

As for me, I have no qualms about you using it.


JUST DON'T ADVERTISE FOR WORK IN CAIRNS, OKAY ??

Ooroo,

:roll:

 

[Brian R]

Ah man, that was going to be the next place I advertised too. If I do, I will send the work to you...we can work something out.

Thanks for the go ahead, I will see about that other guy but I really only cared if you cared.

 

[Shorty]

(1).......I don't come cheap. :wink:


(2).......I.D.G.A.F. :shock:


(3)......Fred is a really nice guy.


Ooroo,

:roll:

 

[Brian R]

Groovy

 

[Shorty]

I would post this on Turd Mound Forum, but I don't have access.


In regard to the original post above, this is tree allens reply after a week or so posted on another forum.




I know this was a attack against my web designs, but in all honesty you mentioned that they are the same design as mine? Not even close shorty, take a good look below and compare the designs I have built below:


I have taken the liberty of removing tree allens modified sites.

This is my reply to his post for those that don't visit the other forum.

In regard to a follow up in my web post, I would like to advise the last poster that it is quite apparent that you still do not understand.

My web sites are all TEMPLATES from WORDPRESS...

These have been modified to suit me.


The web sites you have posted are also from WORDPRESS TEMPLATES.

You DID NOT DESIGN these TEMPLATES.

You MODIFIED them.


I am posting my web sites in order to get feed back about them so that I may make them appeal to MY customers better.

I am not interested in building web sites from stock templates and selling them for profit.


What part of NO do you not understand ??

NO, they are not your design, they are a MODIFIED WORDPRESS TEMPLATE.


I can see through you like a sheet of opaque glass and that also includes your agenda by posting all of those sites on the various forums.

Have a great sunshiny day.

Ooroo,

Shorty.


I've seen the light, and changed my wicked ways.
http://www.get.shorty.com.au

 

[Brian R]

He is a turd, isn't he?

 

[Col F]

His agenda probably works well. He posts links to his sites at every opportunity under the guise of needing a critique or in a reply to a post & that all helps SEO.
I laugh at the critiques, the guy just cannot take criticism (constructive or otherwise).

Col F