Mikey P
Administrator
Look at the site on your smartphone AJ...
The pop would fizzle if we did that.
The pop would fizzle if we did that.
Run on sentence...
With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents, so slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.
Recommended by WillS:
With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents. Now slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.
Or get rid of the now and so and just put "Slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past."
Under the About Us Page:
"started their own business in Santa Cruz Ca in 2001." should be "started their own business in Santa Cruz, CA in 2001."
Contact Us Page:
"Connoisseur Carpet cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and upholstery cleaning to the following areas:"
Upholstery should have a capital U.
Is it possible on the Services Page to move those "Learn More" buttons up so there isn't so much white dead space?
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Also.. is the spacing between the last 3 paragraphs supposed to be like that? The first 2 paragraphs are spaced out.
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Nice site layout and Instagram Page BTW!![]()
We take pride in providing great one on one personal service as well as cleaning results
consider editing it to: one-on-one
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the last 3 sentences in the Meet Mike and Paula section, consider pressing Enter again after each to make them separate paragraphs, or else make them all 1 paragraph.
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Meet Mike and Paula
I saw the link back to the yelp reviews. What about a link back to santa cruz web site.
+200in the Our Service Area section on page 1, consider a capital C and a capital U: Connoisseur Carpet Cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and Upholstery cleaning to the following areas:
+250Should the pic be in the middle of the sentance or between two?View attachment 11959
+250Learn more button for fabric protection isn't working on homepage.
Linda Hopper and Leesa G's reviews got switched
Ya and stop dicking off!
Where the hell is Carson Valley Anyway? Maybe it would be cheaper to get on mega phone and tell the town of 50 you clean carpet...LOL
Long Load Time...Logo takes up to much area on the above the fold content...That's extremely valuable SEO area...Phone # way too small, and only in one area...Strike request quote for call now!...You don't want an email, you want a call...I think your a professional...I don't see it anywhere on your page...People are interested in right now service, not dictionary meanings...If you offer all services, why do you call yourself carsonvalleycarpetcleaning??? SEO I bet...Do you know I only offer tile and grout cleaning...People seldom ask if I do carpets...>>>Make your vacuum have LEDS that blink to get your attention on your logo...<<< Out of the ballpark IDEA!!!!! That's all for now...Bye Bye Folks! Good Luck!
I don't know where your from, we are the capital...LOL If it wasn't for the strip, Carson City would be less than a blip on the map...and shouldn't someone who lives in Nevada know their capital city?
Population 102,00 btw
Load time will decrease when I decrease the image weights.
Logo will stay. Content above the fold is overrated.....and no I don't need to watch any M. Cutt's vids .....I have a pretty good grasp of the whole SEO thing.
Phone will be increased...see op
"Request for quote" is on desktop and will stay.......changes to "click to call button" on mobile. Email has been working fine so far. Multiple ways to contact.
There is more to that slide than "dictionary meanings"
Carson valley carpet cleaning is for marketing purposes.......online and off
Where does it say month?With your last round of comments, I can't figure out if 8 jobs a month is bragging or complaining...
Run on sentence...
With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents, so slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.
Recommended by WillS:
With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents. Now slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.
Under the About Us Page:
"started their own business in Santa Cruz Ca in 2001." should be "started their own business in Santa Cruz, CA in 2001."
Contact Us Page:
"Connoisseur Carpet cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and upholstery cleaning to the following areas:"
Upholstery should have a capital U.
Is it possible on the Services Page to move those "Learn More" buttons up so there isn't so much white dead space?
Also.. is the spacing between the last 3 paragraphs supposed to be like that? The first 2 paragraphs are spaced out.
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This is so minor but hey I just had an adderall. If it helps... On mobile the text for first 3 paragraphs after the "Fiber protection" picture on the upholstery cleaning page. They're a very faded grey making your mind automatically wanna skip reading it. The last sentence of the 3rd changes to lager font but still faded grey then after that all text is black again. At the part where you have the subheading: Home Owners, Interior Designers, Commercial. I'd add some color behind them or the paragraph following them just to break things up a bit and not look like one giant page of text. Never underestimate how lazy people are to read. Gotta serve text in manageable chunks.