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Mikey P

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With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents, so slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.

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With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents. Now slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.

Or get rid of the now and so and just put "Slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past."

Under the About Us Page:

"started their own business in Santa Cruz Ca in 2001." should be "started their own business in Santa Cruz, CA in 2001."

Contact Us Page:

"Connoisseur Carpet cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and upholstery cleaning to the following areas:"

Upholstery should have a capital U.

Is it possible on the Services Page to move those "Learn More" buttons up so there isn't so much white dead space?

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Also.. is the spacing between the last 3 paragraphs supposed to be like that? The first 2 paragraphs are spaced out.

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Nice site layout and Instagram Page BTW! :biggrin::clap:


Hillary Clinton would approve of those changes.
 
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This is so minor but hey I just had an adderall. If it helps... On mobile the text for first 3 paragraphs after the "Fiber protection" picture on the upholstery cleaning page. They're a very faded grey making your mind automatically wanna skip reading it. The last sentence of the 3rd changes to lager font but still faded grey then after that all text is black again. At the part where you have the subheading: Home Owners, Interior Designers, Commercial. I'd add some color behind them or the paragraph following them just to break things up a bit and not look like one giant page of text. Never underestimate how lazy people are to read. Gotta serve text in manageable chunks.
 
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I saw the link back to the yelp reviews. What about a link back to santa cruz web site.
 
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We take pride in providing great one on one personal service as well as cleaning results

consider editing it to: one-on-one

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the last 3 sentences in the Meet Mike and Paula section, consider pressing Enter again after each to make them separate paragraphs, or else make them all 1 paragraph.

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Meet Mike and Paula

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I saw the link back to the yelp reviews. What about a link back to santa cruz web site.


We will likely add a link back once we upgrade santacruzclean and split the blog off for it to be shared...
 
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in the Our Service Area section on page 1, consider a capital C and a capital U: Connoisseur Carpet Cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and Upholstery cleaning to the following areas:
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Where the hell is Carson Valley Anyway? Maybe it would be cheaper to get on mega phone and tell the town of 50 you clean carpet...LOL

Long Load Time...Logo takes up to much area on the above the fold content...That's extremely valuable SEO area...Phone # way too small, and only in one area...Strike request quote for call now!...You don't want an email, you want a call...I think your a professional...I don't see it anywhere on your page...People are interested in right now service, not dictionary meanings...If you offer all services, why do you call yourself carsonvalleycarpetcleaning??? SEO I bet...Do you know I only offer tile and grout cleaning...People seldom ask if I do carpets...>>>Make your vacuum have LEDS that blink to get your attention on your logo...<<< Out of the ballpark IDEA!!!!! That's all for now...Bye Bye Folks! Good Luck!
 
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Where the hell is Carson Valley Anyway? Maybe it would be cheaper to get on mega phone and tell the town of 50 you clean carpet...LOL

Long Load Time...Logo takes up to much area on the above the fold content...That's extremely valuable SEO area...Phone # way too small, and only in one area...Strike request quote for call now!...You don't want an email, you want a call...I think your a professional...I don't see it anywhere on your page...People are interested in right now service, not dictionary meanings...If you offer all services, why do you call yourself carsonvalleycarpetcleaning??? SEO I bet...Do you know I only offer tile and grout cleaning...People seldom ask if I do carpets...>>>Make your vacuum have LEDS that blink to get your attention on your logo...<<< Out of the ballpark IDEA!!!!! That's all for now...Bye Bye Folks! Good Luck!


Load time will decrease when I decrease the image weights.
Logo will stay. Content above the fold is overrated.....and no I don't need to watch any M. Cutt's vids .....I have a pretty good grasp of the whole SEO thing.
Phone will be increased...see op
"Request for quote" is on desktop and will stay.......changes to "click to call button" on mobile. Email has been working fine so far. Multiple ways to contact.
There is more to that slide than "dictionary meanings"
Carson valley carpet cleaning is for marketing purposes.......online and off
 

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and shouldn't someone who lives in Nevada know their capital city?


Population 102,00 btw
I don't know where your from, we are the capital...LOL If it wasn't for the strip, Carson City would be less than a blip on the map...

Carson City is a place where people with money live...Make the same in Vegas...We'd love you here...I work less than 8 jobs a week, and can pick and weed thru the 2 million people...

Forgot to mention, nice website!
 
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Load time will decrease when I decrease the image weights.
Logo will stay. Content above the fold is overrated.....and no I don't need to watch any M. Cutt's vids .....I have a pretty good grasp of the whole SEO thing.
Phone will be increased...see op
"Request for quote" is on desktop and will stay.......changes to "click to call button" on mobile. Email has been working fine so far. Multiple ways to contact.
There is more to that slide than "dictionary meanings"
Carson valley carpet cleaning is for marketing purposes.......online and off

Good Answers...My whole thing about "request for quote" button is as an owner/operator we like to kill 2 birds with one stone and if we get the call for quote or estimate, we like to work the same day...The request for quote button entertains the idea/suggestion of "come and give me an estimate first..." Closing on the initial appointment is what I'm good at personally...You catch people when there hot for service...A couple days later "they may not be so hot", as a matter of fact, they called someone else and you just lost a job...Matter of fact what's worked for me is a button that says "call for immediate service" like today! Somewhere on the bottom of a page or contact page I suggest quote only by email and then I usually explain "why not have it done today?" Good Luck! Mike is an owner/operator right?
 
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Run on sentence...


With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents, so slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.

Recommended by WillS:

With our ability to use various extractors, scrubbers and modern safe cleaning solutions, there is no need to over use water pressure or strong solvents. Now slow drying and stiff or sticky carpeting is a thing of the past.

+100


Under the About Us Page:

"started their own business in Santa Cruz Ca in 2001." should be "started their own business in Santa Cruz, CA in 2001."

+100

Contact Us Page:

"Connoisseur Carpet cleaning provides the best in Carpet, Tile, and upholstery cleaning to the following areas:"

Upholstery should have a capital U.

+100

Is it possible on the Services Page to move those "Learn More" buttons up so there isn't so much white dead space?

dead space is temporary until we decide on text.




Also.. is the spacing between the last 3 paragraphs supposed to be like that? The first 2 paragraphs are spaced out.

View attachment 11965

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This is so minor but hey I just had an adderall. If it helps... On mobile the text for first 3 paragraphs after the "Fiber protection" picture on the upholstery cleaning page. They're a very faded grey making your mind automatically wanna skip reading it. The last sentence of the 3rd changes to lager font but still faded grey then after that all text is black again. At the part where you have the subheading: Home Owners, Interior Designers, Commercial. I'd add some color behind them or the paragraph following them just to break things up a bit and not look like one giant page of text. Never underestimate how lazy people are to read. Gotta serve text in manageable chunks.


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Dluke 250 (mobile display issue - stick nev covers 2nd slide too soon)
Lee Stockwell 1000 (idea - default NV)
Derek 400 (4 s&g errors)
Hoody 250 (broken learn more button)
Scott S 250 (display)
Will S 400 (4 s&g)
AJ Hackers 500 (display)
 
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