opinions on the wrap

[cobra]

Ok so I need some opinions on this wrap. we did this one in 2015. looking to do our second one this year but not sure if I want to keep the same design. What do you think?

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[Desk Jockey]

Love the blue but not fond of the font.

As cool as it looks, it is difficult at a glance to see who you are and what you do.

If I changed anything I'd change fonts to something easier to read at a distance.

 

[cobra]

Love the blue but not fond of the font.

As cool as it looks, it is difficult at a glance to see who you are and what you do.

If I changed anything I'd change fonts to something easier to read at a distance.

you mean the cursive writing?

 

[Shane T]

Love the blue but not fond of the font.

As cool as it looks, it is difficult at a glance to see who you are and what you do.

If I changed anything I'd change fonts to something easier to read at a distance.

X2

 

[Cleanworks]

you mean the cursive writing?

I think he means that cursed hard to read writing

 

[cobra]

So Font would be the only thing you would change?

 

[hogjowl]

It's ugly

 

[Desk Jockey]

I like blue. Yes the font (type style) is a little too artsy fartsy. It makes it too hard for someone not trying to read it, understand.

I'd put more emphasis on what your service are. You do list them but they are in the same or similar font.

If you leave the design the same, you can go back and make this one match the new one.

Buttt there again, I'm a carpet cleaner. Ask around and see what others think, don't just take my word.

 

[Cleanworks]

The font and separate Nuclean and services a little more.

 

[cobra]

That bad huh

 

[Bob Pruitt]

I would move the name, phone number and website higher...nearer the top. In traffic the information would be visible.
Does someone charge for quotes? If you want to have the free quotes part then move it near the contact information.
Everyone has an opinion so...what ever it is worth.

 

[Desk Jockey]

It's ugly

So are you but you don't hear me complaining about you. I mean you have heart & soul!

 

[EDS]

I would use a solid red or solid orange...and what they said about the fonts. The Nuclean "services" font reminds of a Def Lepard album cover...

 

[cobra]

I would move the name, phone number and website higher...nearer the top. In traffic the information would be visible.
Does someone charge for quotes? If you want to have the free quotes part then move it near the contact information.
Everyone has an opinion so...what ever it is worth.

I had the same feelings when I first saw it. So heres my last question. Do you think this design is so loud that it may run off higher end clientele?

 

[Desk Jockey]

That bad huh

Easily fixable.

 

[cobra]

I would use a solid red or solid orange...and what they said about the fonts. The Nuclean "services" font reminds of a Def Lepard album cover...

which one lol

 

[Desk Jockey]

I had the same feelings when I first saw it. So heres my last question. Do you think this design is so loud that it may run off higher end clientele?

Its fine. You'll just get more out of it with a few tweaks.

 

[hogjowl]

He needs to fire the lesbian, art school graduate.

 

[cobra]

He needs to fire the lesbian, art school graduate.

lol I think I just spit my tea out thru my nose!

 

[Mikey P]

And hire Marty's gay artschool drop out..

 

[hogjowl]

My dude is a NASCAR designer!

 

[Mikey P]

If I saw the Cobra van rolling up my first thought would be..

Well, this poor bastard got kicked out of the RUSH 2112 tribute band and now has to resort to being a janitor.



Sorry bud, the name is good but the van is horrible in everyway.

 

[EDS]

I had the same feelings when I first saw it. So heres my last question. Do you think this design is so loud that it may run off higher end clientele?

The lettering matches your TM. So I don't know if the red or orange. I like your wrap better then mine for what it is worth.

 

[Ron K]

Who designed the first one? I think simple and clean is better. Get a professional graphic artist not some person with a cricket vinyl cutting machine from *&(&*()&*%^*&%^&$)! And usually, if "you",as a BDCC, like it, it probably sucks!

 

[Desk Jockey]

Damn fellas. I believe he asked for help. Not to be kicked in the nuts.

 

[EDS]

It is easy to get sucked in when it starts...vultures I tell ya.

 

[EDS]

Just glad it is someone else's turn...for the tough love.

 

[Desk Jockey]

LOL

 

[Mark Saiger]

I cannot read the name as also mentioned.

Separation of the color, different font... And name replaced and larger first thoughts.

Also, do feel maybe a more modern concept as kind of also mentioned

Color of course... Who can't go wrong with Blue

 

[Steve Lawrence]

Oops, I read it as Nuclear, maybe cuz that's already a word and Nuclean isnt. I agree with the post that says it's hard to tell what you do at a glance--you need to read it all to get the message.