opinions on the wrap
- Thread starter cobra
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Desk Jockey
Member
Love the blue but not fond of the font.
As cool as it looks, it is difficult at a glance to see who you are and what you do.
If I changed anything I'd change fonts to something easier to read at a distance.
As cool as it looks, it is difficult at a glance to see who you are and what you do.
If I changed anything I'd change fonts to something easier to read at a distance.
you mean the cursive writing?
Shane T
Member
Cleanworks
Moderator
I think he means that cursed hard to read writing
hogjowl
Idiot™
It's ugly
Desk Jockey
Member
I like blue. Yes the font (type style) is a little too artsy fartsy. It makes it too hard for someone not trying to read it, understand.
I'd put more emphasis on what your service are. You do list them but they are in the same or similar font.
If you leave the design the same, you can go back and make this one match the new one.
Buttt there again, I'm a carpet cleaner. Ask around and see what others think, don't just take my word.
I'd put more emphasis on what your service are. You do list them but they are in the same or similar font.
If you leave the design the same, you can go back and make this one match the new one.
Buttt there again, I'm a carpet cleaner. Ask around and see what others think, don't just take my word.
Cleanworks
Moderator
The font and separate Nuclean and services a little more.
Bob Pruitt
Member
I would move the name, phone number and website higher...nearer the top. In traffic the information would be visible.
Does someone charge for quotes? If you want to have the free quotes part then move it near the contact information.
Everyone has an opinion so...what ever it is worth.
Does someone charge for quotes? If you want to have the free quotes part then move it near the contact information.
Everyone has an opinion so...what ever it is worth.
Desk Jockey
Member
I would use a solid red or solid orange...and what they said about the fonts. The Nuclean "services" font reminds of a Def Lepard album cover...
I had the same feelings when I first saw it. So heres my last question. Do you think this design is so loud that it may run off higher end clientele?I would move the name, phone number and website higher...nearer the top. In traffic the information would be visible.
Does someone charge for quotes? If you want to have the free quotes part then move it near the contact information.
Everyone has an opinion so...what ever it is worth.
Desk Jockey
Member
Easily fixable.
which one lol
Desk Jockey
Member
Its fine. You'll just get more out of it with a few tweaks.
hogjowl
Idiot™
He needs to fire the lesbian, art school graduate.
lol I think I just spit my tea out thru my nose!
Mikey P
Administrator
And hire Marty's gay artschool drop out..
hogjowl
Idiot™
My dude is a NASCAR designer!
Mikey P
Administrator
If I saw the Cobra van rolling up my first thought would be..
Well, this poor bastard got kicked out of the RUSH 2112 tribute band and now has to resort to being a janitor.
Sorry bud, the name is good but the van is horrible in everyway.
Well, this poor bastard got kicked out of the RUSH 2112 tribute band and now has to resort to being a janitor.
Sorry bud, the name is good but the van is horrible in everyway.
The lettering matches your TM. So I don't know if the red or orange. I like your wrap better then mine for what it is worth.
Ron K
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Who designed the first one? I think simple and clean is better. Get a professional graphic artist not some person with a cricket vinyl cutting machine from *&(&*()&*%^*&%^&$)! And usually, if "you",as a BDCC, like it, it probably sucks!
Desk Jockey
Member
Damn fellas. I believe he asked for help. Not to be kicked in the nuts.
It is easy to get sucked in when it starts...vultures I tell ya.
Just glad it is someone else's turn...for the tough love.
Desk Jockey
Member
LOL
Mark Saiger
Mr Happy!
I cannot read the name as also mentioned.
Separation of the color, different font... And name replaced and larger first thoughts.
Also, do feel maybe a more modern concept as kind of also mentioned
Color of course... Who can't go wrong with Blue
Separation of the color, different font... And name replaced and larger first thoughts.
Also, do feel maybe a more modern concept as kind of also mentioned
Color of course... Who can't go wrong with Blue
Steve Lawrence
Member
Oops, I read it as Nuclear, maybe cuz that's already a word and Nuclean isnt. I agree with the post that says it's hard to tell what you do at a glance--you need to read it all to get the message.
