help me edit this- part two

Mikey P

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"it promises to be ... the I in It should be capitalized

Adam Hale not Hall

veteran MB memberS with an S..

the y in you'll take home 2 credits should be capitalized..

can you ad a # next to the big 9, it looks like a "g"

we'll have Loads of hands on, L should not be capitalized..


how about "Along with the Interlink Las Vegas crew you have an opportunity to meet and great fellow cleaners from around the country, from one truck operators to owners of 40 van fleets. You'll be able to test and run the latest tools and truckmounts from the biggest players in the industry. We'll have loads of hands on........" instead...


Adam, what do you want your class description to really say?
 

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