Sample- Commercial Work Order/Proposal

[Shane Deubell]

This is the first draft, tried to cram everything onto 1 page but looks like we need to use back after all. Some things i already know we have to change in wording but seeing we need the back anyway...

Any ideas, criticism? Concept, Wording, Set up?
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[Shane Deubell]

Sorry, i have to use a different file.

 

[Bruce Humphrey]

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[Shane Deubell]

 

[Shane Deubell]

Can you see this?

 

[Desk Jockey]

Looks great Shane I like the full color, ours are black and white.

 

[Shane Deubell]

We are about to finish this off, does anyone have any comments, suggestions?

 

[Steve Toburen]

We are about to finish this off, does anyone have any comments, suggestions?

Sorry, Shane, I just saw this thread. Overall I like it for quick quotes for smaller jobs. (Knowing you I'm sure you do the full-court press for the big accounts with a customer proposal.)

Below each section I would put this: Monthly pro-rated price for all starred services above _____. (You add them all up for the year, divide by 12, add in something extra for "Murphy" and offer them an even payment plan. There is a fair percentage of companies that like this approach and if nothing else if gives you prospect options and the "Illusion of Control"!)

Steve

PS You've crammed a lot onto one page there!

 

[Shane Deubell]

Thanks Steve.

We do have to expand it to the back...
One conclusion i have made is we have unique issues here because of all the snow we receive. Most buildings have a pound of salt dumped every night at the entrances and we really need to flush that out.

 

[caleb211]

Nice!

 

[Shorty]

Shane, just a couple of obs;

Not trying to be a smart ass, I achieve that status without trying.

Scotchgard does not contain a "u", (under scope of work).

I would also delete the "a" from the following sentence.

"Carpet Cleaning - Initial HWE cleaning consists of using a truck mounted steam cleaning equipment to extract".

I would also change the following wording to:

Carpet is dried using commercial air movers.


Hope this helps.

Looks very good.

 

[Shane Deubell]

Thanks Shorty, looking for criticism . Not worried about my sensitive feelings....
Cheers

 

[Shorty]

Thanks Shorty, looking for criticism . Not worried about my sensitive feelings....
Cheers

Oops

Check your sentence:

"Vapor steam cleaning of all restroon fixtures"


Sorry.