Opinion for my new wrap

[Royal Man]

I getting my new van wrapped.

Welcoming opinions on my wrap design.


Let me have it;

http://revolutionwraps.signvox.com/syst ... 1341862133

 

[Heathrow]

I think the small black font next to the dog should be larger/bolder and in white. Other than that, looks great and simple. Excellent idea mentioning reviews with the web address - might have to steal that idea eat shit!

 

[EcoPro1]

Looks classy!! I like it, and so will your customers. The only ones it will make upset is your competitors.

Two thumbs up!!

 

[Royal Man]

I think the small black font next to the dog should be larger/bolder and in white. Other than that, looks great and simple. Excellent idea mentioning reviews with the web address - might have to steal that idea eat shit!

That is what I was thinking too.-(I had it in light blue/black border for the proof i sent to them)

Also I want the wand heads slightly larger.

I thought the purple carpet with yellow lettering would get attention.

My licence plate by the phone number says: CALL ME

(My wife hates it)

 

[Opie Cleaner]

What does your wife like? I'd consider that

 

[Ken Snow]

I would lose the people and dog as they tend to become the focal point.

 

[Goldenboy]

Not impressed. Just make sure you keep your ugly mug off it.


Golden Boy

 

[Royal Man]

Not impressed. Just make sure you keep your ugly mug off it.


Golden Boy

let me know what you really think.

Here is the link again:

http://revolutionwraps.signvox.com/syst ... 1341862133

 

["The" Al Bradham]

Even though the wrap looks good sitting still most people will be seeing it as you drive down the road. I think it is to busy to read as it moves. I think Ken is right, people will see the people and dog and not read your name.

 

[tmdry]

Don't like it.

Doesn't look like a pro designed it, I would look for another wrap company and not even look back.

 

[FredC]

i think it loos like shit........really

 

[FredC]

 

[Becker]

Run with it, it matches your branding perfectly..

 

[AJR]

Its will take a bit of reading to figure out you clean carpets. Your company name is important but what your selling needs to be more viewable and the focal point. The biggest text on my ads read Carpet Upholstery and Tile Cleaning. Then our company name as well as our website and number. The website needs to be easy to remember. Were in Alabama so www.Bamaclean.com. I am far from an expert but just my opinion.

 

[Hoody]

I can't read the writing where the 'clean spot' is from the wands.

 

[daniel@procarpet]

I don't like it.

Get a few more concepts.

 

[Zee]

It gave me the feel that I got when I looked at your website selling your marketing stuff...looks like a total amateur job.

 

[Dolly Llama]

I can't read the writing where the 'clean spot' is from the wands.

same here
very hard to read

I understand the purple is historically associated royalty ...but a pUrple carpet back ground is a bit much


..L.T.A.

 

[floorguy]

I can't read the writing where the 'clean spot' is from the wands.

same here
very hard to read

I understand the purple is historically associated royalty ...but a pUrple carpet back ground is a bit much


..L.T.A.

X3....

kinda hard to read....eye catchy, but then it blends together to much

 

[alazo1]

Play with the colors but the the concept is great.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Personally I don't like the carpet and agree it's too busy. I'd go back to the drawing board, you're going to have this for a long time. Make sure it's exactly what you want!

 

[FB7777]

I know I'm always hard on you Dave, but I agree with most of the negative comments

The kids and pets wrap thing has been overdone IMO

The clean streak small black font is unreadable

Purple is a catchy color and the Royal name really pops off the purple background


If. You really like it then maybe tweak the black font and reduce the picture to emphasize your name and services


The good news is either way you go, It's light years ahead of the pedo candy van eat shit!

 

[Shane Deubell]

Some good ideas dave, like the highlighted "read more reviews..." part and the our clients say...
Yellow with purple background stands out also.

Try removing the pictures and see what it looks like, they might be right about that.

 

[Ken Snow]

Lose the Free quotes as well in my opinion~ not necc and messes with the phone number.

 

[bob vawter]

who's the broad...
and do you have HER phone #..................?

 

[mirf]

Lose the wrap in this case. have them price for just the lettering. and I agree with getting rid of free qoutes or put it last.

 

[FLYERMAN]

I vote dump it! Dump it NOW!

 

[highsteam]

I would make the carpet & upholstery cleaning bigger. Also include Pet odor removal since there is a dog in the pic.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I think I'd look at a few other concepts.

The purple color is fine but the carpet fibers remind me of shag carpet. oh my...

 

[Becker]

Dave,
I know ken snow. And you sir are no ken snow.