juniorc82
Supportive Member
I did some updating and added some videos, I know its not perfect but I think its decent and custy friendly. I need a fair review (sorry brian I know you will hate it ) procleanmidmo.com
Bobby Lee Swagger said:Jon
Not bad at all you have some nice pictures in there. I like that you donate 5% for cans of food.
I would however change the music on all the videos. I personally like the one for upholstery cleaning but I don't think the majority of your clients will.
Nice Logo too!
They got the idea for the movie "Shooter" from the book "Point Of Impact" by Steven Hunter. 8)Richard- I loved all the Bob (the Nailer) Swagger books and the one of Earl his gfather was great too!
thanks for posting robinsons absentee ballot, shouldnt you be working on a water loss up there in new england instead of sitting on the board?XTREME1 said:Crap
I appreciate your insight Dan. However I think a quality gurantee can be added without scrapping and starting over. I have gotten good reviews from my clients who have accessed my site and watched my videos.danielc said:Jon the website does not tell me why I should call you.
What makes you different or what is your unique selling point?
How can you help me?
Can I trust you and what is your guarantee?
The site does not need improving. You need to scrap it and start over.
HARPER said:Hey Brian,
Will you review Junior's website...& tell me what to post... :?:
Thanks
Harper
Brian R said:HARPER said:Hey Brian,
Will you review Junior's website...& tell me what to post... :?:
Thanks
Harper
Yeah, can you tell him it's complete crap and he needs to start over like Crowley said please?
At first glance it makes me think total chaos...Don't use flash, organize it.......It looks like everything on the page was an after thought.
Also, tell him that he should look at some very professional sites geared toward women and "borrow" some ideas from them...Even if it's just the layout.
Did I just post that in public?? :shock: shiteatinggrin
Oh, and tell him not to be such a sissy nanny and take the criticism like a man for God's sake.
danielc said:Jon the website does not tell me why I should call you.
What makes you different or what is your unique selling point?
How can you help me?
Can I trust you and what is your guarantee?
The site does not need improving. You need to scrap it and start over.
Art Kelley said:danielc said:Jon the website does not tell me why I should call you.
What makes you different or what is your unique selling point?
How can you help me?
Can I trust you and what is your guarantee?
The site does not need improving. You need to scrap it and start over.
I liked the rock and roll and boogie woogie on the carpet and furniture videos, but that's just me. Your target market may well find the videos annoying and juvenile (and unprofessional). When you show a worker working in a home he should be wearing a nice looking outfit or a uniform, not shorts and crappy looking tennys, like a part time bum you found on the street. The home having the carpet cleaned looked like some crappy rental and the sofa looked like something that someone picked up on the side of the road, not the nice furniture your target market would have.
HARPER said:[ART......shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....that is Juniors HOUSE.....
Brian R said:HARPER said:Hey Brian,
Will you review Junior's website...& tell me what to post... :?:
Thanks
Harper
Yeah, can you tell him it's complete crap and he needs to start over like Crowley said please?
At first glance it makes me think total chaos...Don't use flash, organize it.......It looks like everything on the page was an after thought.
Also, tell him that he should look at some very professional sites geared toward women and "borrow" some ideas from them...Even if it's just the layout.
Did I just post that in public?? :shock: shiteatinggrin
Oh, and tell him not to be such a sissy nanny and take the criticism like a man for God's sake.
Well since you had to chime in robinson , I think your slideshow video is dogsh*t on your website. I at least have real videos of real cleaning, getting real results. I like how your slideshow whores out pictures of little babys making messes even though your diper spinning encap process cant properly clean up those messes. Its kinda of funny how the vlm guys gotta validate their technique to the customer.Brian R said:HARPER said:Hey Brian,
Will you review Junior's website...& tell me what to post... :?:
Thanks
Harper
Yeah, can you tell him it's complete crap and he needs to start over like Crowley said please?
At first glance it makes me think total chaos...Don't use flash, organize it.......It looks like everything on the page was an after thought.
Also, tell him that he should look at some very professional sites geared toward women and "borrow" some ideas from them...Even if it's just the layout.
Did I just post that in public?? :shock: shiteatinggrin
Oh, and tell him not to be such a sissy nanny and take the criticism like a man for God's sake.